Friday, November 18, 2016
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Thursday, November 17, 2016
Dear Michael (a letter to Michael Grant about GONE)
November 17, 2016
Dear Michael Grant,
Our conversation yesterday at Jason Low's opinion piece for School Library Journal didn't go well, did it? I entered it, annoyed at what you said last year in your "On Diversity" post. There, you said:
In that long thread, I eventually named the book but you said I was wrong in what I'd said. So, here's a review. I hope it helps you see what I meant, but based on all that I've seen thus far, I'm doubtful.
Here's a description of the book:
Partway through chapter two, you introduce us to Lana Arwen Lazar, who is riding in a truck that is being driven by her, grandfather, Grandpa Luke, who is described as follows (p. 19-20):
Anyway, I wasn't keen on the "wrinkled-up-leather" and "dark brown" skin because you're replicating stereotypical ideas about what Native people look like.
As I continued reading, however, it was clear to me that you were just using the Chumash as decoration. You clearly did some research, though. You've got Grandpa Luke, for example, pointing with his chin. Thing is: I've been seeing that a lot. It makes me wonder if white people have a checklist for a Native character that says "make sure the character points with the chin rather than fingers."
Back to chapter two... Grandpa Luke pointed (with his chin) to a hill. Lana tells him she saw a coyote there and he tells her not to worry (p. 20):
Next, we learn that Lana is with her grandpa because her dad caught her sneaking vodka out of their house to give it to another kid named Tony. Lana defends what she did, saying that Tony would have used a fake ID and that he might have gotten into trouble. Her grandpa says (p. 21):
Lana teases her grandpa, he laughs, and then the truck veers off the road and crashes. Grandpa Luke is gone. Just like the other adults. Lana lies in the truck, injured. Her dog, Patrick, is with her. The chapter ends and you spend time with the other characters.
His being gone is what I was referring to when I said that you erased him. At SLJ, you strongly objected to me saying that. You interpreted that as me saying you're anti-Native. You said that "every adult is disappeared." That you did that to "African-Americans, Polish-Americans, Mexican-Americans, Norwegian-Americans, French-Americans, Italian-Americans..." Yes. They all go away in your story, and because they do, you think it is wrong for me to object. That's when I said to you that you're clearly not reading any of the many writings about depictions of Native people. It just isn't ok to create Native characters and then get rid of them like that. Later in the SLJ thread, you said:
Lana is back in chapter seven. A mountain lion appears. Patrick fights it and it takes off, but Patrick has a bad wound. Lana drifts off to sleep again, holding Patrick's wound to stop the blood. She wakes, part way through chapter ten. Patrick isn't with her but comes bounding over, all healed! Lana wonders if she had healed him. She glances at her mangled arm, which is now getting infected. She touches it, drifts off, and when she wakes it, too is healed. Next she heals her broken leg. All better, she stands up.
So---Lana is a healer, Michael? That, too, is over in checklist land (Native characters who heal others).
In chapter fifteen, Lana and Patrick set out to find food and water and hopefully, her grandfather's ranch. After several hours of walking in the heat, they find the wall that is an important feature of the story, and then, a patch of green grass. There's a water hose and a small cabin. They drink, and she washes the dried blood off her face and hair.
In chapter eighteen, Lana wakes in the cabin, and remembers the last few weeks. She remembers putting the bottle of vodka in a bag with "the beadwork she liked" (p. 203). My guess, given that her grandfather is Chumash, is that the bag we're meant to imagine is one with Native beadwork designs on it.
Lana hears scratching at the door, like the way a dog scratches at a door, and she hears a whispered "Come out." Oh-oh (again), Michael! Native people who can communicate with animals! That on the checklist, too? Patrick's hackles are raised, his fur bristles. They finally open the door and go out out but don't see anyone. She uses the bathroom in an outhouse. When Lana and Patrick head back to the cabin, a coyote is standing there, between the outhouse and the cabin. This coyote, however, is the size of a wolf. She thinks back on what she learned about coyotes, from Grandpa Luke (p. 207):
In chapter twenty-five, two days have passed since Lana's encounter with the coyotes. Lana and Patrick eat the food they find in the cabin, and learn that it belonged to a guy named Jim Brown. He has 38 books in the cabin. Lana passes time reading them. At one point, she realizes there's a space underneath the cabin. In it, she finds gold bricks. She remembers the picks and shovels she saw outside, and the tire tracks leading to a ridge and thinks that, perhaps, Jim and his truck are there. She fills a water jug, and the two set off, following the tire tracks.
In chapter twenty-seven, Lana and Patrick reach an abandoned mining town. She look for keys to the truck they find, and, they peek into the mine shaft. Suddenly they hear coyotes. It seems Lana can hear them saying "food." Lana and Patrick enter the mine, but the coyotes don't follow them. Then, one of them talks to her, telling her to leave the mine. They rush in and attack her but then stop, clearly afraid themselves. She's now their prisoner. They nudge her down, deeper into the mine. She senses something there, hears a loud voice, passes out, and wakes, outside.
In chapter twenty nine, the coyotes push her on through the desert. She thinks of the lead coyote as "Pack Leader." He's the one who speaks to her. She asks him why they don't kill her. He says (p. 326):
Ok--Michael--I've spelled out how your depictions of Lana fail. There's so much stereotyping in there. I gotta take off on a road trip now. I may be back, later, to clarify this letter. I think it is clear but may be missing something in my re-read of it. If you care to respond, please do!
Sincerely,
Debbie Reese
American Indians in Children's Literature
__________
[Michael Grant submitted his comment via email on November 18th after having difficulty with the comment interface. I am pasting it here for your convenience.]
Dear Michael Grant,
Our conversation yesterday at Jason Low's opinion piece for School Library Journal didn't go well, did it? I entered it, annoyed at what you said last year in your "On Diversity" post. There, you said:
Let me put this right up front: there is no YA or middle grade author of any gender, or of any race, who has put more diversity into more books than me. Period.Then you had a list where you were more specific about that diversity. Of Native characters, you said:
Native American main character? No. Australian aboriginal main character, but not a Native American. Hmmm.You do, in fact, have a Native character in Gone. I'd read it but didn't write about it. So when you commented to Jason in the way that you did, I responded as I did, saying you'd erased a Native character right away in one of your books. With that in mind, and your claim that you've done more than anyone regarding diversity, I said you're part of the problem. You wanted to know what book I was talking about. Indeed, you were quite irate in your demands that I name it. You offered to donate $1000 to a charity of my choice if I could name the book. You seemed to think I could not, and that I was slandering you.
In that long thread, I eventually named the book but you said I was wrong in what I'd said. So, here's a review. I hope it helps you see what I meant, but based on all that I've seen thus far, I'm doubtful.
Here's a description of the book:
In the blink of an eye, everyone disappears. Gone. Except for the young. There are teens, but not one single adult. Just as suddenly, there are no phones, no internet, no television. No way to get help. And no way to figure out what's happened. Hunger threatens. Bullies rule. A sinister creature lurks. Animals are mutating. And the teens themselves are changing, developing new talents�unimaginable, dangerous, deadly powers�that grow stronger by the day. It's a terrifying new world. Sides are being chosen, a fight is shaping up. Townies against rich kids. Bullies against the weak. Powerful against powerless. And time is running out: on your birthday, you disappear just like everyone else. . . .Chapter one is set at a school in California. It opens with a character named Sam, who is listening to his teacher talk about the Civil War. Suddenly the teacher is gone. It seems funny at first but then they realize that other teachers are gone, and so is everyone who is 15 years old, or older. In chapter two, Sam, his friend Quinn, and Astrid (she's introduced in chapter one as a smart girl) head home, sure they'll find their parents. They don't.
Partway through chapter two, you introduce us to Lana Arwen Lazar, who is riding in a truck that is being driven by her, grandfather, Grandpa Luke, who is described as follows (p. 19-20):
He was old, Grandpa Luke. Lots of kids had kind of young grandparents. In fact, Lana�s other grandparents, her Las Vegas grandparents, were much younger. But Grandpa Luke was old in that wrinkled-up-leather kind of way. His face and hands were dark brown, partly from the sun, partly because he was Chumash Indian.At first, I thought, "cool." You were bringing a tribally specific character into the story! If he's Chumash, then, Lana is, too! There's whole chapters about her. She's a main character. But, you didn't remember her. Or maybe, in your responses at SLJ, you were too irate to remember her?
Anyway, I wasn't keen on the "wrinkled-up-leather" and "dark brown" skin because you're replicating stereotypical ideas about what Native people look like.
As I continued reading, however, it was clear to me that you were just using the Chumash as decoration. You clearly did some research, though. You've got Grandpa Luke, for example, pointing with his chin. Thing is: I've been seeing that a lot. It makes me wonder if white people have a checklist for a Native character that says "make sure the character points with the chin rather than fingers."
Back to chapter two... Grandpa Luke pointed (with his chin) to a hill. Lana tells him she saw a coyote there and he tells her not to worry (p. 20):
�Coyote�s harmless. Mostly. Old brother coyote�s too smart to go messing with humans.� He pronounced coyote �kie-oat.�Hmmm... Grandpa Luke... teaching Lana about coyote? That sounds a bit... like the chin thing. I'm seeing lot of stories where writers drop in coyote. Is that on a check list, too?
Next, we learn that Lana is with her grandpa because her dad caught her sneaking vodka out of their house to give it to another kid named Tony. Lana defends what she did, saying that Tony would have used a fake ID and that he might have gotten into trouble. Her grandpa says (p. 21):
�No maybe about it. Fifteen-year-old boy drinking booze, he�s going to find trouble. I started drinking when I was your age, fourteen. Thirty years of my life I wasted on the bottle. Sober now for thirty-one years, six months, five days, thank God above and your grandmother, rest her soul.�Oh-oh. Alcohol? That must be on the checklist, too. I've seen a lot of books wherein a Native character is alcoholic.
Lana teases her grandpa, he laughs, and then the truck veers off the road and crashes. Grandpa Luke is gone. Just like the other adults. Lana lies in the truck, injured. Her dog, Patrick, is with her. The chapter ends and you spend time with the other characters.
His being gone is what I was referring to when I said that you erased him. At SLJ, you strongly objected to me saying that. You interpreted that as me saying you're anti-Native. You said that "every adult is disappeared." That you did that to "African-Americans, Polish-Americans, Mexican-Americans, Norwegian-Americans, French-Americans, Italian-Americans..." Yes. They all go away in your story, and because they do, you think it is wrong for me to object. That's when I said to you that you're clearly not reading any of the many writings about depictions of Native people. It just isn't ok to create Native characters and then get rid of them like that. Later in the SLJ thread, you said:
"I threw the reference to the Chumash in as an effort to at least acknowledge that there are still Native Americans in SoCal. That was it. It's a throwaway character we see for three pages out of a 1500 page series."Really, Michael? That's pretty awful. I hope someone amongst your writing friends can help you see why that doesn't work!
Lana is back in chapter seven. A mountain lion appears. Patrick fights it and it takes off, but Patrick has a bad wound. Lana drifts off to sleep again, holding Patrick's wound to stop the blood. She wakes, part way through chapter ten. Patrick isn't with her but comes bounding over, all healed! Lana wonders if she had healed him. She glances at her mangled arm, which is now getting infected. She touches it, drifts off, and when she wakes it, too is healed. Next she heals her broken leg. All better, she stands up.
So---Lana is a healer, Michael? That, too, is over in checklist land (Native characters who heal others).
In chapter fifteen, Lana and Patrick set out to find food and water and hopefully, her grandfather's ranch. After several hours of walking in the heat, they find the wall that is an important feature of the story, and then, a patch of green grass. There's a water hose and a small cabin. They drink, and she washes the dried blood off her face and hair.
In chapter eighteen, Lana wakes in the cabin, and remembers the last few weeks. She remembers putting the bottle of vodka in a bag with "the beadwork she liked" (p. 203). My guess, given that her grandfather is Chumash, is that the bag we're meant to imagine is one with Native beadwork designs on it.
Lana hears scratching at the door, like the way a dog scratches at a door, and she hears a whispered "Come out." Oh-oh (again), Michael! Native people who can communicate with animals! That on the checklist, too? Patrick's hackles are raised, his fur bristles. They finally open the door and go out out but don't see anyone. She uses the bathroom in an outhouse. When Lana and Patrick head back to the cabin, a coyote is standing there, between the outhouse and the cabin. This coyote, however, is the size of a wolf. She thinks back on what she learned about coyotes, from Grandpa Luke (p. 207):
�Shoo,� Lana yelled, and waved her hands as her grandfather had taught her to do if she ever came too close to a coyote.It didn't move, though. Behind it were a few more. Patrick wouldn't attack them, so, Lana yelled and charged right at them. The coyote recoiled in surprise. Lana was a flash of something dark, and the coyote yelped in pain. She made it to the cabin. She heard the coyotes crying in pain and rage. The next day, she found the one who she'd charged at (p. 207):
Still attached to its muzzle was half a snake with a broad, diamond-shaped head. Its body had been chewed in half but not before the venom had flowed into the coyote�s bloodstream.What does that mean? Does Lana's healing power mean snakes will defend her? Or, that she can summon them to help her? Or is the appearance of these snakes just coincidental and has nothing to do, really, with Lana?
In chapter twenty-five, two days have passed since Lana's encounter with the coyotes. Lana and Patrick eat the food they find in the cabin, and learn that it belonged to a guy named Jim Brown. He has 38 books in the cabin. Lana passes time reading them. At one point, she realizes there's a space underneath the cabin. In it, she finds gold bricks. She remembers the picks and shovels she saw outside, and the tire tracks leading to a ridge and thinks that, perhaps, Jim and his truck are there. She fills a water jug, and the two set off, following the tire tracks.
In chapter twenty-seven, Lana and Patrick reach an abandoned mining town. She look for keys to the truck they find, and, they peek into the mine shaft. Suddenly they hear coyotes. It seems Lana can hear them saying "food." Lana and Patrick enter the mine, but the coyotes don't follow them. Then, one of them talks to her, telling her to leave the mine. They rush in and attack her but then stop, clearly afraid themselves. She's now their prisoner. They nudge her down, deeper into the mine. She senses something there, hears a loud voice, passes out, and wakes, outside.
In chapter twenty nine, the coyotes push her on through the desert. She thinks of the lead coyote as "Pack Leader." He's the one who speaks to her. She asks him why they don't kill her. He says (p. 326):
�The Darkness says no kill,� Pack Leader said in his tortured, high-pitched, inhuman voice.That "Darkness" is the voice she heard in the mine. It wants her to teach Pack Leader... She asks Pack Leader to take her back to the cabin so she can get human food there. Later on, Darkness speaks through Lara.
Ok--Michael--I've spelled out how your depictions of Lana fail. There's so much stereotyping in there. I gotta take off on a road trip now. I may be back, later, to clarify this letter. I think it is clear but may be missing something in my re-read of it. If you care to respond, please do!
Sincerely,
Debbie Reese
American Indians in Children's Literature
__________
[Michael Grant submitted his comment via email on November 18th after having difficulty with the comment interface. I am pasting it here for your convenience.]
Hi, it's Michael Grant. But feel free to call me Satan.
I'm writing this at Ms. Reese's kind invitation because we've had a . . . well, a bit of a thing. Which I think we both find distressing because we are on the same side. So, anyway, I apologize for this being so long. (Bear in mind I write 500-page books, so you're getting off easy.)
You know the running gag on The Simpsons where Marge will look at Homer and ask him what he's thinking? And then we get a cutaway to a cross-section of Homer's head and see that inside is a toy monkey banging a tin drum? That's sort of the level of disconnect we have here.
Basically, what you believe I thought or knew is not even close. Partly it may be the way I write. If you had a number line from seat-of-the-pants writers (pantsers) to planners I would be so far over on the pantser side there'd be no one to my left. It's almost all improvised.
So, things you (and probably most people) see as a plan, I know to be improvised. I write big, densely-plotted books with big casts and multiple concurrent plot lines. I also write series, and in my approach to a series, the whole thing is essentially one long book. I like doing this because (among other reasons) I like plenty of space to play out character arcs. My series are 'built' like a TV mini-series. I know that's not indicated in any way on the book, but I don't design the covers.
So the little toy monkey in my head is worrying from Page 1 about the plot primarily. Not that it's the only thing, it's just the hardest thing, so most of my thinking is on that. Second comes character.
As I always tell aspiring writers, there's no 'right' way to do this job. There's only your way, which is whatever it takes to get you from Page 1 to the little hash marks at the end. But civilians - people who are not writers - are told a lot of nonsense by writers trying, usually unsuccessfully, to explain how we do what we do. The true answer is: we don't know. But that's unsatisfying, so we make up a bunch of reasonable-sounding nonsense, and civilians come away with all these notions of inspiration and falling in love with your characters and tearing your soul open (which sounds painful) and they think it's real. It's mostly not. Writing is not inspiration so much as problem-solving. (And typing.) A series of if-then propositions. Constant reliance on imagination, over which I, at least, have very little conscious control.
You need to understand that whatever image we put out there, we are scared little children trying to cajole the mute beast in the back of our heads into giving us the ideas we then type up. I'm not complaining - it's the best gig in the world. I have a ridiculously great life. (Now.) I've done real work, I've been poor, I know and remember and thank the universe daily for giving me this, instead of what I started out with. So, not complaining; explaining. But an overwhelming amount of our mental resources is spent convincing ourselves that we are doing something real. That we aren't just delusional. Yes, I should be over that. But I'm not. I don't know a writer who is.
So, with that aside, I'm going to respond with some specifics re: Gone. Here's your review and my notes. Not sure how the layout will work...let's see:
Chapter one is set at a school in California. It opens with a character named Sam, who is listening to his teacher talk about the Civil War. Suddenly the teacher is gone. It seems funny at first but then they realize that other teachers are gone, and so is everyone who is 15 years old, or older. In chapter two, Sam, his friend Quinn, and Astrid (she's introduced in chapter one as a smart girl) head home, sure they'll find their parents. They don't.
Partway through chapter two, you introduce us to Lana Arwen Lazar, who is riding in a truck that is being driven by her, grandfather, Grandpa Luke, who is described as follows (p. 19-20):
He was old, Grandpa Luke. Lots of kids had kind of young grandparents. In fact, Lana�s other grandparents, her Las Vegas grandparents, were much younger. But Grandpa Luke was old in that wrinkled-up-leather kind of way. His face and hands were dark brown, partly from the sun, partly because he was Chumash Indian.
At first, I thought, "cool." You were bringing a tribally specific character into the story! If he's Chumash, then, Lana is, too! There's whole chapters about her. She's a main character. But, you didn't remember her. Or maybe, in your responses at SLJ, you were too irate to remember her?
MG: I'm author or co-author of, give-or-take, 150 books, 13 series, over 27 years. Ballpark, that's, say, 30,000 pages. Probably, what, 1000 named characters? Probably more, I have no way to add it up. Deb, I have forgotten entire series, let alone characters. I could not name the main characters in Everworld, for example, or Remnants. You know why I always say something vague like "it's around 150 books?" Because every time I count it comes out different. I have frequently forgotten that I am the author of the Barf-O-Rama series. Okay, maybe forgetting that is deliberate, but I actually loved Magnificent 12, and with a gun to my head I couldn't tell you a third of the characters.
I'd be concerned it's old age, but my memory has never been good for those kinds of things. Don't take my word for it, ask anyone who knows me in kidlit. Quick story: I used to wait tables and was damn good at it, too, but only because I was organized. People skills? Well, I waited on this couple, chatted, got to be friendly, they paid and left. I went to the front to seat a couple I saw there. Same people. I did not recognize them.
So, TL;DR: forgetting the background of one out of at least 1000 characters? Not only possible, inevitable.
Anyway, I wasn't keen on the "wrinkled-up-leather" and "dark brown" skin because you're replicating stereotypical ideas about what Native people look like.
MG: Actually, I was thinking Native Americans are darker-skinned on average than white folks, but mostly I was thinking: old dude who lives in the desert.
As I continued reading, however, it was clear to me that you were just using the Chumash as decoration. You clearly did some research, though. You've got Grandpa Luke, for example, pointing with his chin. Thing is: I've been seeing that a lot. It makes me wonder if white people have a checklist for a Native character that says "make sure the character points with the chin rather than fingers."
MG: You know when I first learned about the pointing thing? Just now, reading your note. I had literally no idea. He points with his chin because he's driving.
Back to chapter two... Grandpa Luke pointed (with his chin) to a hill. Lana tells him she saw a coyote there and he tells her not to worry (p. 20):
�Coyote�s harmless. Mostly. Old brother coyote�s too smart to go messing with humans.� He pronounced coyote �kie-oat.�
Hmmm... Grandpa Luke... teaching Lana about coyote? That sounds a bit... like the chin thing. I'm seeing lot of stories where writers drop in coyote. Is that on a check list, too?
MG: Sorry, nope. Everyone hears the coyotes because they've mutated. (Incidentally, not my best choice for the book, but, live and learn.) The coyotes are there because they are typical large fauna in the SoCal desert. (And sometimes here in Tiburon at night.) Basically I had to decide whether the mutagenic effect of the FAYZ worked on animals as well as humans, and I thought this might be fun.
Next, we learn that Lana is with her grandpa because her dad caught her sneaking vodka out of their house to give it to another kid named Tony. Lana defends what she did, saying that Tony would have used a fake ID and that he might have gotten into trouble. Her grandpa says (p. 21):
�No maybe about it. Fifteen-year-old boy drinking booze, he�s going to find trouble. I started drinking when I was your age, fourteen. Thirty years of my life I wasted on the bottle. Sober now for thirty-one years, six months, five days, thank God above and your grandmother, rest her soul.�
Oh-oh. Alcohol? That must be on the checklist, too. I've seen a lot of books wherein a Native character is alcoholic.
MG: My best friend at the time (that's over) is a recovering alcoholic. My father-in-law is a recovering alcoholic. (Loooong time sober.) It was in my head. Luke is an alcoholic to signal that maybe Lana has a genetic predisposition, and to explain why Luke is upset with Lana. Am I aware that alcoholism rates are high on Native American reservations? Of course. Can I see where you'd think that's where I was going? Yes, I do. Here's the thing: had I consciously thought Indian=Alcoholic, the scene would have been different. Why? Because it would be a trope, and I don't like writing clich�s.In effect he's only an alcoholic because I need him to bitch at Lana.
Lana teases her grandpa, he laughs, and then the truck veers off the road and crashes. Grandpa Luke is gone. Just like the other adults. Lana lies in the truck, injured. Her dog, Patrick, is with her. The chapter ends and you spend time with the other characters.
His being gone is what I was referring to when I said that you erased him. At SLJ, you strongly objected to me saying that. You interpreted that as me saying you're anti-Native. You said that "every adult is disappeared." That you did that to "African-Americans, Polish-Americans, Mexican-Americans, Norwegian-Americans, French-Americans, Italian-Americans..." Yes. They all go away in your story, and because they do, you think it is wrong for me to object. That's when I said to you that you're clearly not reading any of the many writings about depictions of Native people. It just isn't ok to create Native characters and then get rid of them like that. Later in the SLJ thread, you said:
"I threw the reference to the Chumash in as an effort to at least acknowledge that there are still Native Americans in SoCal. That was it. It's a throwaway character we see for three pages out of a 1500 page series."
Really, Michael? That's pretty awful. I hope someone amongst your writing friends can help you see why that doesn't work!
MG: My characters are my employees. They aren't my pals, they work for me. Anyone who comes to work for me has to be ready for the fact that I do have rather a tendency to kill characters: to 'fire' them. With extreme prejudice. (It's worse than a 'you're fired!' from Trump. But not as bad as having him grab you by the. . .) So, the way this works is if you go to work for Michael Grant (me), you're quite likely to end up dead. Now, if I can only kill white people, I think the EEOC is going to have a beef with me. Put another way, if I can't kill a diverse character, I can't hire a diverse character. It's a basic part of the job description: Michael's a good boss. . . except if he kills you. That's the nature of the gig.
Lana is back in chapter seven. A mountain lion appears. Patrick fights it and it takes off, but Patrick has a bad wound. Lana drifts off to sleep again, holding Patrick's wound to stop the blood. She wakes, part way through chapter ten. Patrick isn't with her but comes bounding over, all healed! Lana wonders if she had healed him. She glances at her mangled arm, which is now getting infected. She touches it, drifts off, and when she wakes it, too is healed. Next she heals her broken leg. All better, she stands up.
So---Lana is a healer, Michael? That, too, is over in checklist land (Native characters who heal others).
MG: Lana was never a Native-American in my head. In my head, she's basically Latina. (The 2 Vegas grandparents) When I came up with the name "Lazar" it was meant to be a riff on Lazarus that would still sound Hispanic. Her middle name is Elvish. (Arwen Evenstar, LOTR) Both together were meant to sort of point to 'healing.'
She's a healer because I needed a healer. I couldn't have all this violence going on without some method of repairing people and getting them back in the action. It had literally nothing to do with her ethnicity, at least in my head. And again, had I thought I was doing that, I'd have done something different because it would have been a hoary clich�. Again, back to my employer/employee relationship: Basically the job description was, "Troubled tough chick who becomes Healer and will totally still shoot you." That's what Lana was. I don't think at any point after that I thought about or referenced her ethnicity. She was not her race, she was her function, and her specific personality.
In chapter fifteen, Lana and Patrick set out to find food and water and hopefully, her grandfather's ranch. After several hours of walking in the heat, they find the wall that is an important feature of the story, and then, a patch of green grass. There's a water hose and a small cabin. They drink, and she washes the dried blood off her face and hair.
In chapter eighteen, Lana wakes in the cabin, and remembers the last few weeks. She remembers putting the bottle of vodka in a bag with "the beadwork she liked" (p. 203). My guess, given that her grandfather is Chumash, is that the bag we're meant to imagine is one with Native beadwork designs on it.
Lana hears scratching at the door, like the way a dog scratches at a door, and she hears a whispered "Come out." Oh-oh (again), Michael! Native people who can communicate with animals! That on the checklist, too? Patrick's hackles are raised, his fur bristles. They finally open the door and go out out but don't see anyone. She uses the bathroom in an outhouse. When Lana and Patrick head back to the cabin, a coyote is standing there, between the outhouse and the cabin. This coyote, however, is the size of a wolf. She thinks back on what she learned about coyotes, from Grandpa Luke (p. 207):
�Shoo,� Lana yelled, and waved her hands as her grandfather had taught her to do if she ever came too close to a coyote.
It didn't move, though. Behind it were a few more. Patrick wouldn't attack them, so, Lana yelled and charged right at them. The coyote recoiled in surprise. Lana was a flash of something dark, and the coyote yelped in pain. She made it to the cabin. She heard the coyotes crying in pain and rage. The next day, she found the one who she'd charged at (p. 207):
Still attached to its muzzle was half a snake with a broad, diamond-shaped head. Its body had been chewed in half but not before the venom had flowed into the coyote�s bloodstream.
What does that mean? Does Lana's healing power mean snakes will defend her? Or, that she can summon them to help her? Or is the appearance of these snakes just coincidental and has nothing to do, really, with Lana?
In chapter twenty-five, two days have passed since Lana's encounter with the coyotes. Lana and Patrick eat the food they find in the cabin, and learn that it belonged to a guy named Jim Brown. He has 38 books in the cabin. Lana passes time reading them. At one point, she realizes there's a space underneath the cabin. In it, she finds gold bricks. She remembers the picks and shovels she saw outside, and the tire tracks leading to a ridge and thinks that, perhaps, Jim and his truck are there. She fills a water jug, and the two set off, following the tire tracks.
In chapter twenty-seven, Lana and Patrick reach an abandoned mining town. She look for keys to the truck they find, and, they peek into the mine shaft. Suddenly they hear coyotes. It seems Lana can hear them saying "food." Lana and Patrick enter the mine, but the coyotes don't follow them. Then, one of them talks to her, telling her to leave the mine. They rush in and attack her but then stop, clearly afraid themselves. She's now their prisoner. They nudge her down, deeper into the mine. She senses something there, hears a loud voice, passes out, and wakes, outside.
In chapter twenty nine, the coyotes push her on through the desert. She thinks of the lead coyote as "Pack Leader." He's the one who speaks to her. She asks him why they don't kill her. He says (p. 326):
�The Darkness says no kill,� Pack Leader said in his tortured, high-pitched, inhuman voice.
That "Darkness" is the voice she heard in the mine. It wants her to teach Pack Leader... She asks Pack Leader to take her back to the cabin so she can get human food there. Later on, Darkness speaks through Lara.
Ok--Michael--I've spelled out how your depictions of Lana fail. There's so much stereotyping in there. I gotta take off on a road trip now. I may be back, later, to clarify this letter. I think it is clear but may be missing something in my re-read of it. If you care to respond, please do!
MG: The problem again is that we have a disconnect. In Luke, you're seeing a Native American. I'm seeing a temp employee who is there to deliver some character background on Lana and then conveniently die. Nothing about Lana was ever Native American in my head; she's a character, there for a reason that has nothing to do with her background. But you were seeing something different. It's a frequent issue in books - <i>what's in your head defines your read, as what's in my head defines my writing.
So, when I said I didn't recall writing a Native American character, that's just the truth. Luke is a throwaway. Like hiring a temp for a day's work. He's there to deliver a few lines and poof. Lana's there for a much bigger role, but one that has nothing to do with her ethnicity. I'm not dismissing ethnicity, but essentially, we had 332 kids starving and murdering each other, and my focus was on making it work. The characters had other stuff on their minds. They were eating pet cats and being threatened by psychopaths. And I was sweating bullets hoping somehow it would all come together.
But can I understand how you'd read it and think, "Oh, cool, a Native American character? Maybe this will go somewhere?" Sure. Of course, now. But the thought never entered my head then. I mean, I've hired hundreds, probably thousands, of throwaway characters, and they've been of all races and genders, and when they've delivered their lines, they go away. Again: if you can't be killed off, you can't be hired.
So, let me explain how this looks to me. First, yes, I will claim my diversity 'points,' and proudly. Because however much it irritates people, the fact is I was pushing diverse casts long before anyone was scolding me into doing it. I'm proud of the work I've done. I believe in the cause, and I'm not going to pretend I didn't write what I wrote. No one was nagging us to be inclusive in 1993 when we were writing Ocean City. We (I was writing with Katherine in those days) did it because we want to have access to any and all interesting characters. And yes, in part because we thought it was the 'right thing' to do. I've continued to keep diverse characters front and center. I didn't have to be pushed into it, it's who I am. It may be the one thing my mother got right with me.
But now, let me broaden this out. I am not fundamentally a literary type (he says, handing a snarky line to future reviewers); I am, deep down in my soul, political. As you see the world through various prisms, my prism tends to be politics, philosophy, ethics, all that stuff that doesn't earn any money. That's my jam: politics. I get politics at a sort of intuitive level. I feel the flow. You don't have to believe me, you can think I'm crazy, but politics runs deep with me. I quit writing for a year to do political ads for the Democratic Legislative Campaign Committee and won a Pollie Award - 3rd class - for some piece of whatever. As much as I've written fiction, I've probably written more on politics. Used to have a politics blog.
The atrocity that is Trumpy the Pig was a knife to the guts. I felt it coming. Did everything I could to stop it. Obviously that didn't work. (Duh.) But, as an armchair pol, I sensed, intuited, whatever, that something like this was coming. Before my eldest went off to college we were talking and I said dude, this is swinging back. You could feel the pendulum had reached its limit and was just about to come swinging back. My first instinct is political: you defend what is defensible. In fact, my guide on this is Field Marshall Montgomery (what?) who was a big believer in 'tidying' the battlefield. In other words, giving up what can't be held, and strengthening what can be.
What I see is that the Good Guys (us) were not in any way prepared for what had happened. Instinctively, I wanted a tidy battlefield. There are things we can defend and win, there are things we have to defend regardless, and there are things where we should take a step back, the better to prevail in the end. That was my initial (intemperate) comment on the SLJ thread. I wasn't taking a shot at Jason, who my wife tells me (with some force) is a good dude. And again, bear in mind, I don't spend my days talking about books or libraries, I spend my days arguing politics with people who all fall into a sort of brutalist 'shop talk' jargon.
Now, here's the thing. I want more diverse characters and more diverse writers. I think it's a good in itself, and it's more fun for me as a writer. But if I write a Native American character and have to worry I'll be beaten up and called names, I'm not going to do it. No non-Native American writer will. That is the opposite of what we both want.
At the same time, I understand that it is galling to see Native Americans reduced to sideline roles in the country that was stolen from them. Lovely country, sorry about the smallpox and the massacres, now go stand in the corner, look solemn and say, "how." A bit like having a prop Jew in a Holocaust play directed by Germans. Just as I understand how galling it is when that kind of treatment goes to African-American, gay, Latino, etc... characters. But given the situation that exists - mostly white writers - the only way for large numbers of PoC characters to come into existence is for them to be written by white writers. Yes, that sucks. Hopefully that will change. If I had a magic wand and could make it happen, I'd do it. (Might cure cancer first.) My tiny contribution today was to give an African-American starting writer my email and my lawyer. (And no one gets my email.) But no one can just snap their fingers and redress the balance tonight. It's going to be a long war of attrition. So for the short term, it's largely going to be white writers. The question I have is: how do we get white writers to write diverse characters?
Not by attacking them when they do. Criticize? Of course. Comes with the territory. Teach? Of course. Review? Yep. Where I part company is the destruction of books. Mein Kampf is still on the market, and, as a Jew? I would never support banning it. I flatly reject the banning or withdrawing of books.
I think we need to find a way forward that squares that circle. We need a way to do the work of diversity without the attacks on writers. And they are attacks. That doesn't mean I think we should be having writers produce new L'il Black Sambo books, nor does it mean I don't think you and others should hold our feet to the fire. But not every infraction is a firing offense.
Writers don't want to be told what to write. Activists don't want us randomly grabbing stereotypes and plugging them in. This doesn't feel insoluble to me, if we can start by working working together toward a goal we share, a goal I've put an awful lot of work into, as have you.
Damned if I know how we do that, but we all have our skills, and mine is making stuff up, not bringing people together. Or punctuation. Or driving at the speed limit. Or not eating an entire pie. So many things I'm not good at. But if someone has an idea how to bring peace between activists and writers, I'm open.
Michael Grant
TRUST MY HEART - Carol J Post - One Book Giveaway on This Blog, Plus More
Welcome, Carol. Tell us how much of yourself you write into your characters.
A little less with each book! In my first book, Midnight Shadows, my heroine was basically a fictionalized version of me. I even made her a court reporter (my former career). Each of my subsequent characters has had fewer of my own traits. In Trust My Heart, my latest release, Jami is much more like my artistic, dreamer daughter than like me.
What is the quirkiest thing you have ever done?
I don�t think of myself as a quirky person, so I had to ask for my sister�s help on this one. She assured me my obsession with lists is not normal, which might put it in the �quirky� category. I always have two or three to-do lists going at any given time. I love marking things off, so if I do something that�s not on the list, I add it so I can have the pleasure of crossing it off. I even have an Excel spreadsheet in my computer titled �Where I Put Things.� It�s those rarely used items that always get me. This list tells me which shelf of which closet holds the item I�m looking for.
That spreadsheet sounds like a good idea to me. I may have to borrow it. I do have a file with where I put the Christmas presents I acquire early. When did you first discover that you were a writer?
I discovered I had a natural bent for writing in my late elementary school years. I was one of those weird kids who actually enjoyed doing book reports. In high school, I got to do research papers and had even more fun. I never considered writing for publication, though, until the early to mid-1990s. My husband and I were working with Marriage Encounter at the time, and the leader would edit the talks we wrote. After submitting two or three of them, I received a note back that in 25 years of leading Marriage Encounter weekends, mine was the first talk she�d received that didn�t require edits. For the first time, I questioned whether I might be able to sell what I wrote. Although I got to see several magazine articles go to print, it would be almost twenty years before I got my first novel published.
Tell us the range of the kinds of books you enjoy reading.
I actually enjoy a wide range of genres, as long as the books are clean. I read books written in any time frame (historical, contemporary, or futuristic), and the genres I enjoy include young adult, suspense, romance, mystery, and fantasy. If the characters are relatable and the story is compelling, I�ll probably like the book.
How do you keep your sanity in our run, run, run world?
The short answer? I don�t!
Actually, I do have some things that help keep me sane. First, I always like to start my day with prayer and Bible reading. It helps to center me and keep my focus in the right place. Another thing that helps is regular exercise. Nothing energizes me and clears my mind like an hour of Zumba. Lastly, my lists help keep me sane. No matter how crazy my schedule is, just having everything down on paper seems to make it so much more manageable.
How do you choose your characters� names?
Sometimes, I hear a name and think, �Ooo, that would be a great character name.� Other times, I find those lists with the 100 most popular baby names for whatever decade my character was born. For last names, I use an online surname generator. I type in a character�s first name, then click �Generate Last Names.� Sometimes it gives me names like Lefkopoulou and Abderrazzaq. (Yes, those are actual names the program recommended to me.) I�m glad, though, that it also spits out plenty of less complicated ones, since I�m pretty sure readers want to be able to pronounce the names we give our characters.
What is the accomplishment that you are most proud of?
Being nominated for a RITA� award this year was a pretty cool experience. (For anyone not familiar with this particular award, it�s like the Oscars of romance writing.) The one accomplishment that thrilled me the most, though, was selling my first book. It had been such a long time coming (about fifteen years since crafting my first novel-length story). After years of rejection, discouragement, and long periods where I just stopped writing, getting �the call� was a dream come true.
If you were an animal, which one would you be, and why?
I think I�d be a cat. But it would have to be one of the Post cats, because we spoil them rotten. We�re down to one right now, since our older two passed away. Midnight travels with us, sleeps with us, and hangs out with me as I write. He doesn�t like to drink after the dog, so he hops up on one of the dining room chairs and demands that I give him his water in a bottle. And I do!
What is your favorite food?
It really depends on my mood. I�m a really healthy eater, so those are the types of foods I usually crave. I�m probably the only person on the planet whose mouth waters while looking at a salad. I don�t have a sweet tooth, so desserts are no temptation for me. Instead, I crave salty snacks. So if I have a weakness, it would have to be potato chips. I try to leave them at the store and eliminate the temptation.
What is the problem with writing that was your greatest roadblock, and how did you overcome it?
The biggest roadblock for me was discouragement. I still sometimes have to fight it. Writing is a solitary activity, and lots of rejection goes with the territory. Having a support system is so important. Although my family was always supportive, it wasn�t until 2010, when I joined Romance Writers of America and my local chapter, Tampa Area Romance Authors, that I gained what I needed to keep forging ahead.
Tell us about the featured book.
Grant McAllister arrives in Murphy, North Carolina , with one aim: to sell his inherited property and leave as quickly as possible. The big-city lawyer has no interest in his late, estranged grandparents or the dilapidated mansion he just acquired. After his high-profile divorce, he should be avoiding perky reporters, too. But Jami Carlisle is honest, funny, and undeniably appealing.
After breaking up with her safe-but-smothering boyfriend, Jami is determined to ace her first big assignment. A story about the McAllister estate is too intriguing to ignore�much like its handsome, commitment-phobic heir. Thanks to her digging, the pieces of Grant�s fraught family history are gradually fitting into place, but also upending all his old beliefs.
The two draw closer as they share their dreams, until misread signals and misunderstandings begin to test their trust. But in the unspoiled beauty of the Smoky Mountains
Please give us the first page of the book.
Decision making�s a bear.
Well, not all decisions, just ones that had the potential to ruin her life.
Jami Carlisle tilted her face upward and expelled a frustrated sigh. �Okay, Lord, I need some advice. Robert�s getting tired of waiting, and frankly, I can�t blame him.�
She stepped onto an outcropping of rock that jutted over a small creek. Early morning sunlight filtered through the canopy overhead, painting the flora varying shades of green. Somewhere nearby, a cardinal whistled its cheery song. The McAllister woods were her refuge, her place to gather her thoughts and regroup. It didn�t matter that they weren�t hers. They adjoined her property, and she�d been coming there as long as she could remember.
She released a sigh. �Robert�s expecting me to say yes.� Actually, everyone was expecting her to say yes. The whole town had the two of them engaged and all but married the moment he�d taken her hand at the harvest party hayride in eighth grade. They�d each dated others through the years, but last summer it had turned more serious, and in the eyes of the people of Murphy, North Carolina , that was enough to cement it�she was marrying Robert.
With another sigh, Jami dropped to the cool surface of the rock and let her sneakered feet dangle over the edge. Just below, water trickled over a downed limb and around protruding rocks on its lazy path to lower ground. A breeze rustled the trees above, harmonizing with the soothing sound of the creek. But the peace she usually found there eluded her.
�This shouldn�t be so difficult.� She lifted her eyes skyward. �Robert�s a good man. He�s kind and responsible, and he�s a Christian.� There weren�t many people she felt as close to as Robert.
So what was she waiting for? A sign? She snickered at the image that popped into her head, one of those black billboards with bold white letters:
Jami. Marry the Man.
-God
How can readers find you on the Internet?
Website � www.caroljpost.com
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I love to connect with my readers!
Thank you, Lena , for inviting me to participate on your blog. I had a great time being here!
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Wednesday, November 16, 2016
Turkey Fact Trackers!
Having any holiday fun in the classroom yet? This is my favorite time of year, but boy can it turn stressful real quick! There's so much to do at home and school that it can be so overwhelming... am I right?! But most days teachers put their big girl/boy pants on and still provide that holiday happiness for their kiddos. Fake it 'til ya make it, is what I always say!
Today the second graders became Turkey Fact Trackers. If I'm going to be real honest I couldn't think of anything better, ha! I also couldn't find any cute Thanksgiving goodies because everything Christmas has already flooded the aisles! So, I just glued a little feather and googly eye to the end of a craft stick :)
We went on the hunt for important turkey facts in our Turkey Talk Nonfiction Reader. When someone shared an interesting fact, we all tracked it with our Turkey Tracker (which they all seemed to think look more like trolls #fail #ormaybenot #theydolovetrolls)
As we tracked turkey facts we wrote them on our turkey chart from Babbling Abby.
After reading and tracking, we made our very own turkey hats. The idea was inspired by Miss Kindergarten. I used Cara Carroll's turkey face templates and just free-handed the feathers :)
The students had to track facts in their booklets before writing facts on their feathers.
They all ended up looking pretty stinkin' cute!
And if this isn't a beautiful chart, I'm not sure what is! I love Abby's monthly charts. So easy to make and I don't have to put any thought into them!
Thankfully the kids ending up loving my turkey trackers and were very excited to take them home for the day :)
Only a couple more days friends!!! Then it's time for some relaxation and pie ;)
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